another of my lovely poems for ya all to enjoy.
alone i travel down a darknend road
alone i travel in this darkend world
alone is all ive ever truly known
i reach for others and they push me down
alone is all i know
i reach out for love and i get shoved
alone is what i am
this path ive taken is only held together by my freinds that i have.
those threads where once strong but now are fragile.
soon i shall fall from this world.
alone in the darkness, alone in my misery.
i only reach out for those that will accept me
and yet im still alone.
Lovely poem indeed, God of Death. A poem of isolation and depressiveness. This sounds like someone who would tend on commiting suicide. [oh my, I hope you don't think of these things! >.<] Nice poem overall, buddy! Keep it up! I'm surprised you haven't recieved comments yet. Ah well....first is best, I suppose. JK :p
i really liked it. it has a rhythm it has flow it has a direct point. i like it a lot. very depressing but i can pretty much count on anything that you write will probably be depressing. it is good, simple and good.
i love this peom it reminds of a few i have writen but i dont got the guts to show them to anyone:thumb: i loved it
Originally Posted by god of death
well dont fret and dont be afraid, let us see them sometime. dont live in fear face it.
anyhow thanks people i do appreiciate the comments! but not everything i write is dark.