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    Otaku god of death may be famous one day god of death may be famous one day god of death's Avatar
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    another of my lovely poems for ya all to enjoy.

    alone

    alone i travel down a darknend road
    alone i travel in this darkend world
    alone is all ive ever truly known

    i reach for others and they push me down
    alone is all i know
    i reach out for love and i get shoved
    alone is what i am

    this path ive taken is only held together by my freinds that i have.
    those threads where once strong but now are fragile.
    soon i shall fall from this world.
    alone in the darkness, alone in my misery.

    i only reach out for those that will accept me
    and yet im still alone.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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    Lovely poem indeed, God of Death. A poem of isolation and depressiveness. This sounds like someone who would tend on commiting suicide. [oh my, I hope you don't think of these things! >.<] Nice poem overall, buddy! Keep it up! I'm surprised you haven't recieved comments yet. Ah well....first is best, I suppose. JK

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    Re: alone

    i really liked it. it has a rhythm it has flow it has a direct point. i like it a lot. very depressing but i can pretty much count on anything that you write will probably be depressing. it is good, simple and good.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    another of my lovely poems for ya all to enjoy.

    alone

    alone i travel down a darknend road
    alone i travel in this darkend world
    alone is all ive ever truly known

    i reach for others and they push me down
    alone is all i know
    i reach out for love and i get shoved
    alone is what i am

    this path ive taken is only held together by my freinds that i have.
    those threads where once strong but now are fragile.
    soon i shall fall from this world.
    alone in the darkness, alone in my misery.

    i only reach out for those that will accept me
    and yet im still alone.
    i love this peom it reminds of a few i have writen but i dont got the guts to show them to anyone i loved it

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    Re: alone

    well dont fret and dont be afraid, let us see them sometime. dont live in fear face it.

    anyhow thanks people i do appreiciate the comments! but not everything i write is dark.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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