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Otaku
Alone
I am forever alone.
Inside my head there is no control.
Forever there is chaos because.
Of you and what your memory caused.
Forever i shall love you.
Yet even though i would like to hug you.
Over and over again thinking of you is so immense.
I search in my head to remember that name.
That saved me so from the insane shame.
That memory that was so cherised is now gone lost forever.....
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Oh wow this poem is very sad. It had good describing in it though and I really enjoyed reading it!^^ I hope to see more!^^
Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
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i like this poem. it looks like the person in the poem had someone that meant alot to them. it was really nice. good job!! =)
IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
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Otaku
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Thank you both. It is in a since personal to me. I'm going to make a part 2 soon.
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Anything that comes from ones personal struggle is always so touching to me... Thank you so much for sharing this.
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I always like when someone writes a poem on thier personal struggles. It remind me of how I can relate to them some way or another. Thank you for sharing your poems to everyone.
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really touching poem but I donot think that you are a lone ..You have your friends there waiting for you ..
Really nice work I love it read it ..Good Job..^^
Foolish beating
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yes alone.
it is sad to be alone, but there is another side to it,
and that is you never get hurt.
also you can never hurt someone else.
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