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    Alone

    I am forever alone.
    Inside my head there is no control.
    Forever there is chaos because.
    Of you and what your memory caused.
    Forever i shall love you.
    Yet even though i would like to hug you.
    Over and over again thinking of you is so immense.
    I search in my head to remember that name.
    That saved me so from the insane shame.
    That memory that was so cherised is now gone lost forever.....

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    Re: Alone

    Oh wow this poem is very sad. It had good describing in it though and I really enjoyed reading it!^^ I hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Alone

    i like this poem. it looks like the person in the poem had someone that meant alot to them. it was really nice. good job!! =)

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    Re: Alone

    Thank you both. It is in a since personal to me. I'm going to make a part 2 soon.

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    Re: Alone

    Anything that comes from ones personal struggle is always so touching to me... Thank you so much for sharing this.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    I always like when someone writes a poem on thier personal struggles. It remind me of how I can relate to them some way or another. Thank you for sharing your poems to everyone.

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    Re: Alone

    really touching poem but I donot think that you are a lone ..You have your friends there waiting for you ..
    Really nice work I love it read it ..Good Job..^^

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    Re: Alone

    yes alone.
    it is sad to be alone, but there is another side to it,
    and that is you never get hurt.
    also you can never hurt someone else.

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