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    Alone

    Alone at my desk
    I don’t know what to do
    I am afraid of what to say

    What should I do?
    Why must I choose?
    Where will I go from here?

    One word could be the last
    For it may the wrong thing
    It may be the right

    If I say the wrong thing
    What will he think?
    I don’t want him to hate me

    I love him but to choose
    When I know not what to choose
    It’s the hardest thing ever.

    I’m alone at my desk
    Waiting for an answer
    Not knowing what to expect.

    well i hope you like it. i know its not the best but i just felt like writting somthing.
    Please give advice.

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: Alone

    I like it, though the point is a bit unclear. Regardless, it is a good free verse poem.

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    Re: Alone

    Oh well thanks. I think the point is mainly that I dont want to make a desicion because i am scared of outcome.

    ^_^ thanks a bunch for comment. ^_^

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    Re: Alone

    Oh! I would have think you were afraid of expressing yourself. That's what i felt when I read it. Some fear of letting known of your own feelings. As if, from now, every word you might say might have some really big consequences. I like it. A good one.
    They watched him in his descent;
    the Archangel just made honour to his name
    the highest of all but, just a mere messenger.
    Yet a Master he was, one who is of He.

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