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Reply With QuoteI like it, though the point is a bit unclear. Regardless, it is a good free verse poem.
Alone at my desk
I don’t know what to do
I am afraid of what to say
What should I do?
Why must I choose?
Where will I go from here?
One word could be the last
For it may the wrong thing
It may be the right
If I say the wrong thing
What will he think?
I don’t want him to hate me
I love him but to choose
When I know not what to choose
It’s the hardest thing ever.
I’m alone at my desk
Waiting for an answer
Not knowing what to expect.
well i hope you like it. i know its not the best but i just felt like writting somthing.
Please give advice.
I like it, though the point is a bit unclear. Regardless, it is a good free verse poem.
Oh well thanks. I think the point is mainly that I dont want to make a desicion because i am scared of outcome.
^_^ thanks a bunch for comment. ^_^
Oh! I would have think you were afraid of expressing yourself. That's what i felt when I read it. Some fear of letting known of your own feelings. As if, from now, every word you might say might have some really big consequences. I like it. A good one.
They watched him in his descent;
the Archangel just made honour to his name
the highest of all but, just a mere messenger.
Yet a Master he was, one who is of He.
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