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    Fallen Angel PhoenixSara may be famous one day PhoenixSara's Avatar
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    Alone

    Feeling alone even when i am with him.
    Being together but being worlds apart.
    I feel nothing should i tell him?
    Should i risk the chance of saying the truth,
    Or should i risk the chance of nothingness.
    I am totally numb even to his touch and tears.
    Nor does he ignite any feeling
    or my want to discuss or have any conversation.


    I hear his words yet my heart is frozen.
    I feel his touch yet I feel no passion.
    I see his face yet in my future he is not.
    Why do i feel so alone?
    Even if we are not physically worlds apart.
    Last edited by PhoenixSara; Jun 13, 2008 at 06:09 AM. Reason: edit grammar
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    Re: Alone

    i know what u mean i feel that way all the time but i have no one

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    Re: Alone

    I am sorry for all the pain you feel this poem felt like it came from the heart.........I hope that you wont be alone for long.....I like this poem it is good keep on writing.

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    Re: Alone

    Thats so beautiful Sara I wish I could make poems like that again.
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    Re: Alone

    do you know that your poem made me cry, your poem touched my heart .... very good job ... =^_^=
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