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    alone

    Pain screams from every sense in my body,
    I lie paralized, dead, I have no soul.
    Nothing to do but live with the pain.
    No one can see what I must go thru,
    I try to escape but I can't,
    I just can't, you see?
    Your tortured stare, the one that burns
    The one that says, "You Are The One Who Destroyed Me."
    That very stare is the one that binds me to this world,
    The only thing that keeps me a live
    It makes me wonder will it ever be like it was?
    No it won't i just have to acept i will always be alone

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    Re: alone

    very emotional i like it whats the main piont if you don't mind me asking
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: alone

    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    very emotional i like it whats the main piont if you don't mind me asking
    um well i always write some pretty weird stuff and this is just one of those things that you just have to type up I mean my family is going thru problems and so am I and I just I guess instead of hurting anyone I wrote

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    Re: alone

    that is very true into what your going through and writing it out in a poem does make it worth something rather then just a little prick of wood.
    And this poem made very sense to me now that understand the pain.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: alone

    i wrote along with many others in a book and when life gets me down(or i am just bored ) i post them

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