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    Alone!

    I sit alone in my world of never ending problems,
    always screaming on the inside and sighing
    quietly on the outside always wanting to to
    just let go but i never do.

    All i ever wanted was to believe in friends
    and people who say they will be there for you
    but in the end when your moments from letting
    it all go all you get is silence.

    All alone i pray for peace as a battle rages
    inside of me , i hear angels weeping as i pray
    for peace but the anger just want go , so i sit
    alone and wait for nothing.

    The world i know is dieing as i sit there watching
    i crack a smile as i feel my self go crazy from the
    loneliness that keeps me so comfortable as the world
    falls apart , in spite of me life still goes on never worrying
    if i live or die.

    Does anyone care about anything ,but themselves
    or am i the only that feels the emptiness? Some
    times the method to the madness doesn't make since
    if only i could understand the the feeling that makes
    my rage so perfect that peace would drive me insane
    how crazy must i be?
    ______________________________________________
    Everyone has moments or even months where they
    feel alone and think that the world is yelling at them
    feeling cornered and angry this poem portrays this or
    i tried to make this poem feel like that. anyway
    comments and suggestions are welcomed.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Alone!

    hmmm minor spelling errors...i think it was alright except for the ending threw me off but i liked it all the same.
    take care chris
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    Re: Alone!

    wonderful marvelous incredible magnificent bravo love it keep it up blackrose keep it up
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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