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    Alone is Cold

    A heart so full
    Will never pour

    The envy inside,
    The anger before

    With crimson wings
    Will seal the faithful door.

    The doubt in our hearts
    Will drown a golden shore.

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    Re: Alone is Cold

    i love it like wow

    the imagry and in so little words
    i really like the ryhming at the end of each stanza. it made the poem very nicelly.

    two thumbs up! ^_^
    love and hope to see more!

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    Re: Alone is Cold

    Quote Originally Posted by P.R. Princes View Post
    i love it like wow

    the imagry and in so little words
    i really like the ryhming at the end of each stanza. it made the poem very nicelly.

    two thumbs up! ^_^
    love and hope to see more!
    Thank you. Most of my poems suck, though this happens to be my favorite one that I've written. ^^

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    Re: Alone is Cold

    i would hope it is it is very good.

    i love it alot. I can never put so much emotion and imagry into somthing really short. that is talent there. ^_^

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    Re: Alone is Cold

    This poem came up because of some things that were happening in my life- which I believe is the best way to write a poem; taking something from your life and telling how you really feel. Thanks again for the positive comments.

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