i love it like wow
the imagry and in so little words
i really like the ryhming at the end of each stanza. it made the poem very nicelly.
two thumbs up! ^_^
love and hope to see more!
A heart so full
Will never pour
The envy inside,
The anger before
With crimson wings
Will seal the faithful door.
The doubt in our hearts
Will drown a golden shore.
i love it like wow
the imagry and in so little words
i really like the ryhming at the end of each stanza. it made the poem very nicelly.
two thumbs up! ^_^
love and hope to see more!
i would hope it is it is very good.
i love it alot. I can never put so much emotion and imagry into somthing really short. that is talent there. ^_^
This poem came up because of some things that were happening in my life- which I believe is the best way to write a poem; taking something from your life and telling how you really feel. Thanks again for the positive comments.
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