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Old Jul 31, 2007, 10:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Alone In Darkness

Alone we walk,
alone we die
while we are alive.
The people we know as friends,
and there are the people we know as enemies.
Alone in the cold world,
there are places that seem so empty.
Why do our human hearts seem so hollow?
Either we are alive or we are dead.
Do they only remember us because they knew us,
or is it because of our headstones stating we were alive
at one point and time and that we have passed on.
We the ones who are
forsaken in this world,
are not really forgotten.
The ones who knew our dreams
can carry them out. Evan though
we have died, we can still walk
among them in their hearts
and in their dreams ....





thank u for help ryomakurosaki
when i got stuck.
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Old Jul 31, 2007, 10:30 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
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Old Jul 31, 2007, 10:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Alone In Darkness

Hmmm... I like this... it's very thoughtfull... and very inspiring for me... because I live with such faith too- that I will be remembered. If I tell people my dreams and so- if I leave something behind me, like maybe just a good poem or just a great story...

A nice work Crystallan!!! I'll be waiitng forward for more!!!
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Old Jul 31, 2007, 10:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
i know that feeling as well. i glad it u happy
death is never easy to deal with ...
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Old Jul 31, 2007, 10:47 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hmmm... I like this... it's very thoughtfull... and very inspiring for me... because I live with such faith too- that I will be remembered. If I tell people my dreams and so- if I leave something behind me, like maybe just a good poem or just a great story...

A nice work Crystallan!!! I'll be waiitng forward for more!!!
thank you i glad you enjoy it .
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