wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
Alone we walk,
alone we die
while we are alive.
The people we know as friends,
and there are the people we know as enemies.
Alone in the cold world,
there are places that seem so empty.
Why do our human hearts seem so hollow?
Either we are alive or we are dead.
Do they only remember us because they knew us,
or is it because of our headstones stating we were alive
at one point and time and that we have passed on.
We the ones who are
forsaken in this world,
are not really forgotten.
The ones who knew our dreams
can carry them out. Evan though
we have died, we can still walk
among them in their hearts
and in their dreams ....
thank u for help ryomakurosaki
when i got stuck.![]()
wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....
Hmmm... I like this... it's very thoughtfull... and very inspiring for me... because I live with such faith too- that I will be remembered. If I tell people my dreams and so- if I leave something behind me, like maybe just a good poem or just a great story...
A nice work Crystallan!!! I'll be waiitng forward for more!!!
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