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    Alone In Darkness

    Alone we walk,
    alone we die
    while we are alive.
    The people we know as friends,
    and there are the people we know as enemies.
    Alone in the cold world,
    there are places that seem so empty.
    Why do our human hearts seem so hollow?
    Either we are alive or we are dead.
    Do they only remember us because they knew us,
    or is it because of our headstones stating we were alive
    at one point and time and that we have passed on.
    We the ones who are
    forsaken in this world,
    are not really forgotten.
    The ones who knew our dreams
    can carry them out. Evan though
    we have died, we can still walk
    among them in their hearts
    and in their dreams ....





    thank u for help ryomakurosaki
    when i got stuck.

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    Re: Alone In Darkness

    wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: Alone In Darkness

    Hmmm... I like this... it's very thoughtfull... and very inspiring for me... because I live with such faith too- that I will be remembered. If I tell people my dreams and so- if I leave something behind me, like maybe just a good poem or just a great story...

    A nice work Crystallan!!! I'll be waiitng forward for more!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Alone In Darkness

    Quote Originally Posted by rikus demonic lover View Post
    wow thats a good poem..so many happy thoughts come my mind reading this..(sorry if what im saying freaks u out.but ive been surrounded my death my whole life) so it just kinda makes me happy....
    i know that feeling as well. i glad it u happy
    death is never easy to deal with ...

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    Re: Alone In Darkness

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Hmmm... I like this... it's very thoughtfull... and very inspiring for me... because I live with such faith too- that I will be remembered. If I tell people my dreams and so- if I leave something behind me, like maybe just a good poem or just a great story...

    A nice work Crystallan!!! I'll be waiitng forward for more!!!
    thank you i glad you enjoy it .
    i will try to post more soon

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