Thread: Alone in the night

A few spelling errors, and okay capitalization. I'm not sure I like the rhyming eeffect in this poem.

Originally Posted by man of lost soul

I walk alone in the night thare is no fear.
I walk alone in the night no one els is here.
Peaple say to be alone in wrong .
But when u have nothing to offer whare do u belong.
I walk alone in the night by choice not by fate.
My mind and soul fill with hate.
I walk alone in the night all is out of reach and sight.
peaple ask why do i stay alive.
Becose in the night i fight to servive.
if im ment to live then live i shall.
but live be my will and mine alone.
I walk alone in the night every one els can go to hell.

els=else
Peaple=People
u=you
peaple=People
Becose=Because
servive=survive
im=I'm
i=I
els=else


There I gave you some spelling corrections.

As for the poem I did not really like it. The rhyming is forced and one part of the poem kinda made me mad like...

I walk alone in the night every one els can go to hell.

Why would you say something like that? Part of your poem rhymes but then it stops. Not good to start something and not finish it.

don't abbriviate your words either

its okay but too much aggressive way, the end part is like way too much in it, other than that its pretty hope you do better on the next poem

yes yes i Know the spelling suck.I can tell storys
but when it come to writing i have just never been that good.