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    Alone part 2

    It's been 2 years ever since that moment.
    When you called me with that news.
    I thought it was something good.
    But that tone of voice you had.
    Seemed like you were really sad.
    Once you told me I cried even though I was mad.
    That moment still makes me mad.
    And I bet that guy is glad.
    That he got what he wanted.
    But instead he hurt you.
    And he hurt me.
    I can't think about you without thinking about that moment.
    Where that was the last moment I would hear you ever again.

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    Re: Alone part 2

    Wow, so sad... This is another poem that make me want to know more about its story. The feeling of loss and anger runs deep in this.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Alone part 2

    sad, so sad,
    but I must give you props for a wonderful poem.
    I enjoyed the first part alot, but I enjoyed this part even better.
    keep writing. ok

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    Re: Alone part 2

    Thank you both i might not write what happend to her unless i talk to DB about it as it isn't pretty.

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