darkness of an angel

I'm all alone in this place called "earth"
I'm so alone with no one beside me,
Not even my brother who's always listening
To those emo girls.

And my sister....
I have nothing to say
About her.

And my patents,
Where the hell are you?
I here wanting to ask for advise,
And you two are somewhere,
We feed ourselve.

All three of us have after school jobs
Just to keep everything running smoothly,
Alone in this place I have no one to talk to.

But my little black bear,
It listenings to everything I say,
And never talks back or call me names.

But all of you never have the time to talk
Or listen to me,
I should just walk out that door and never come
Back!

I will not even look back or even to say goodbye,
Because I know you'll not even notices that I'm gone!!


(I'm just a little depressed and our parenst aren't
really gone,
I'm just pissed too.)

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ice viper

I can relate to you I'm kinda depressed as well. Your poem is very well writen keep up the good work. If you need anyone to talk with pm me and I will listen. I can't wait to read more from you.

RayMe

This is good... theres a spelling mistake there.. a few ^^

like how u potrayed it.. keep up the good work... ^^ boombastic powerful words would make this poem filled with more feelings...

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Best friend

"Alone in this place"

I like This poem
It's really good
and There is a lot of sedness

I wish to u happy life
AnD
I hope that you will not be alone in Anime Online

Thank you for the poem

And Best wishes