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    alone in this place

    I'm all alone in this place called "earth"
    I'm so alone with no one beside me,
    Not even my brother who's always listening
    To those emo girls.

    And my sister....
    I have nothing to say
    About her.

    And my patents,
    Where the hell are you?
    I here wanting to ask for advise,
    And you two are somewhere,
    We feed ourselve.

    All three of us have after school jobs
    Just to keep everything running smoothly,
    Alone in this place I have no one to talk to.

    But my little black bear,
    It listenings to everything I say,
    And never talks back or call me names.

    But all of you never have the time to talk
    Or listen to me,
    I should just walk out that door and never come

    I will not even look back or even to say goodbye,
    Because I know you'll not even notices that I'm gone!!

    (I'm just a little depressed and our parenst aren't
    really gone,
    I'm just pissed too.)

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    Re: alone in this place

    I can relate to you I'm kinda depressed as well. Your poem is very well writen keep up the good work. If you need anyone to talk with pm me and I will listen. I can't wait to read more from you.

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    Re: alone in this place

    This is good... theres a spelling mistake there.. a few ^^

    like how u potrayed it.. keep up the good work... ^^ boombastic powerful words would make this poem filled with more feelings...

    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
    I'm BACK AO!

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    Re: alone in this place

    "Alone in this place"

    I like This poem
    It's really good
    and There is a lot of sedness

    I wish to u happy life
    I hope that you will not be alone in Anime Online

    Thank you for the poem

    And Best wishes

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