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    Alone in this world.

    Unaccompained in this world I know I am.
    I do not konw why I am excluded all the time.
    Tho I have people around I do not feel that I have many friends maybe none at all. Why do I feel excluded all the time.
    This empty feeling keeps going on and on.

    I keep thinking will anyone notice if I am goin or not.
    I've tested myself in the past but will I test myself again.
    To Wipe myself off of the face of this earth.
    All alone is this world I will be. Will I find love or freindship in this world.
    I do not know the only thing I know is being lonely.
    Will I stay or will I leave this world I do not know.

    All I know is that I don't want to be alone anymore.
    Will anyone help me from this darkness or will I just push them all away.
    I've push so may away that I can't get myself out of this darkness which I call my home now. I've tested myself to get out of this darkness but someone has alway been there to put me back into the light.

    Now that light is gone and darkness is my home now. Excluded from this world I am I do not know why. The only thing I know is that I am alone in this world.

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    Re: Alone in this world.

    wow, Ice that is really a good poem, great job, sad, and lonly, but it is great I feal this way too sometimes, Ice I am there for you budy, never doubght it I am a friend to help you to the light, I am a friend to give you comfort and life. anyways keep it up.
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    Re: Alone in this world.

    Thanks Ichigo I just felt that I need to get some things off of my chest. And thank you again for the nice comment.

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    Re: Alone in this world.

    No problem Ice what type of friend would I be if I left you in that darkness you speek of? lol keep up the poetry.
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    Re: Alone in this world.

    wow that was good and lots of emotions.
    Keep it up
    I hope to see more, it was very good.^.^

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    Re: Alone in this world.

    Quote Originally Posted by ice viper View Post
    Unaccompained in this world I know I am.
    I do not konw why I am excluded all the time.
    Tho I have people around I do not feel that I have many friends maybe none at all. Why do I feel excluded all the time.
    This empty feeling keeps going on and on.

    I keep thinking will anyone notice if I am goin or not.
    I've tested myself in the past but will I test myself again.
    To Wipe myself off of the face of this earth.
    All alone is this world I will be. Will I find love or freindship in this world.
    I do not know the only thing I know is being lonely.
    Will I stay or will I leave this world I do not know.

    All I know is that I don't want to be alone anymore.
    Will anyone help me from this darkness or will I just push them all away.
    I've push so may away that I can't get myself out of this darkness which I call my home now. I've tested myself to get out of this darkness but someone has alway been there to put me back into the light.

    Now that light is gone and darkness is my home now. Excluded from this world I am I do not know why. The only thing I know is that I am alone in this world.
    What?! No! You're not alone!!! What about Kelly?! What about me?!?!?!? For goodness' sakes, I noticed you did NOT respond to my bloody PM, and I was VERY upset.

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    Re: Alone in this world.

    Nice poem Ice. I'm glad to see you finally letting out some of that emo that you've been holding on to. Keep it up and you'll feel much better for it in the long run. Great job!

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    Re: Alone in this world.

    wow... nice poem... i like it.. but it's sad.. :/ im here for u sis.. *pokes* ^^

    Keep up the good work..seen a lot of improvement there..

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