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    Alone in this World(I wrote this when I lost a freind)

    I woke up early this morning,
    With nothing to do,
    Filled with loneliness and boredom,
    With no one to talk to.

    I try to be part of it all,
    But I'm alone in the world,
    I try to make friends,
    I'm still alone in the world.

    When the night comes,
    I go back to my bed,
    A whole day of solitude,
    Spinning round I'm my head.

    With nobody to call or see,
    I'm alone in this world,
    With nobody wanting to hang with me,
    I'm alone in my world.

    Its really not my fault,
    That I dont fit in with all them,
    Its really not my fault,
    That I am alone again.

    I wonder what is wrong with me,
    Because nobody likes me,
    They dont want to befriend me,
    So its just me only me.

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    Re: Alone in this World(I wrote this when I lost a freind)

    nice poem but honestly u need to make more friends. u r too yong to be depressed. you'll live. nice emotions tho

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    Re: Alone in this World(I wrote this when I lost a freind)

    ohhh, the first stanza is my favorite. Great job, the flow is beautiful.
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