+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: Alternate life

  1. #1
    RPG Lord and Master/Poet Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada)
    Posts
    881
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts

    Alternate life

    Blind Eyes

    Days felt hindered under my new skin,
    A flow of life made me breathe something I did not know.
    Moving about seeing closely what others do not,
    Feelings nurtured under an incomprehensible experience.
    Once again time passed by without my knowledge,
    But I remained awake throughout it all...

    White flashes broke through my thoughts,
    Darkness had no hold upon my mind.
    Tilting back and forth on a single thread,
    Remaining centered by my will alone.
    To fight was to survive in this journey,
    Intersections of my being collided with another.

    Lost and pained without knowing of these sensations,
    Confused of what came in different forms from before.
    Learning once again the ways that life performs,
    The numbness letting way to recognition.
    My head is giving me life or death,
    But in the end I just simply can't chose...



    I confess that life's greatest joy is to ignore.
    (or to discover)
    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
    Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME

  2. #2
    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    2,736
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Alternate life

    I love the flow you have in poems. Your wording is quite beautiful as well.
    Seduced by Flesh


  3. #3
    RPG Lord and Master/Poet Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada)
    Posts
    881
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts

    Re: Alternate life

    You are simplistic and I do not see any attempt at understanding what I wrote....*HMPH!*

    But thanks for saying you like what for a while didn't like since I always seem to keep the same composure of my writtings!

    *DoubleHMPH!*
    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
    Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME

  4. #4
    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    2,736
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Alternate life

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    You are simplistic and I do not see any attempt at understanding what I wrote....*HMPH!*
    Firt off, I never try to understand someone's poem. Well, only if it's posted in our clan Library. -cough-

    Out here? I normaly keep it simple and straight to the point regarding the technical issues of a poem. If I tried to understand every poem I've read here at AO? I'd go brain dead from the lack common sense people have.
    Seduced by Flesh


+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. POTM: Alternate Holiday
    By Soldat of life in forum Archive of Events
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: Dec 21, 2006, 05:35 AM
  2. what do you wish!! in you're life???
    By cloud101 in forum Clans v1
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: Sep 17, 2006, 07:44 AM
  3. Evangelion alternate reality
    By Tenseiga in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: Dec 13, 2005, 01:19 PM
  4. Alternate Couplings
    By Rio Takeuchi in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: Apr 24, 2005, 08:33 PM
  5. alternate universes
    By E-Yuki-chan04 in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 23
    Last Post: Apr 21, 2005, 09:59 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts