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    "Alucard"

    Walking in the night:
    Searching for prey.
    Happy they don't give a fight.
    Hate for the light of day.
    Eternal Undead Life...

    Darkness being my only friend;
    Greeting it with open arms.
    My heart will never mend;
    no rerward for my charms.
    Eternal Undead Life...

    Waiting for my life to end;
    Knowing it never will.
    Eternal life I may lend;
    Drinking until my fill.
    Eternal Undead Life...

    Tremendous power under my control;
    To call upon whenever needed.
    "Guns won't kill me, you fool!"
    That is, if i'm well feeded.
    Eternal Undead Life...

    Love I may never know;
    My heart forever broken.
    This curse trust upon me by my foe;
    After being bitten, I was weakened.
    Eternal Undead Life...
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    Re: "Alucard"

    After reading this poem...I couldn't see anything...lol...it was so dark...haha...I like simplicity, not so much the choice of words

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    Re: "Alucard"

    Quote Originally Posted by pigtaru
    After reading this poem...I couldn't see anything...lol...it was so dark...haha...I like simplicity, not so much the choice of words
    yeah... i did this my sophmore year of high school for an english class... it's not great really... i just did it the day before my poetry packet was due. it needs lots of work... while i was reading over it today to put up here i noticed some words were not flowing with it. i think i'll look it over some more and change a few things. not now... later.
    thanks for commenting pitaru...
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    Re: "Alucard"

    mmmmm i see this as a challgene to my own tribute to Alucard. Anyways, nice one with the repetitive use of the last line. Reminds me of my own poem. Truly it does describe him. Anyways, nice one keep it up.

    U finally put it up.
    Last edited by Blade X; May 24, 2006 at 11:54 PM.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: "Alucard"

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    mmmmm i see this as a challgene to my own tribute to Alucard. Anyways, nice one with the repetitive use of the last line. Reminds me of my own poem. Truly it does describe him. Anyways, nice one keep it up.

    U finally put it up.
    yup thanks, blade. and no its not a challenge. see it as mutual contributors.
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    Re: "Alucard"

    It wasn't that bad at all, the author intended to kinda describe alucards nightly activities.

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