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    Always and Forever

    feeling like you could be the one
    looking into the morning sun,
    knowing were meant to be
    forever just you and me,

    always going to love you till the end
    always throw thick and thin,
    can't wait to spend our life together
    feels like our life would be better,

    your something special to me
    hoping everyone could see,
    were going to last forever
    always going to be together,

    waiting to spend my life with you
    as I know you are to,
    the only thing I think would be better
    was that we would always be together,

    always forever you and me,
    that's the way it's meant to be

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    Re: Always and Forever

    Good job on the second stanza. The words didn't rhyme but carried a certain rhythm with them that came close to having the same affect.

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