Always There

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 10:40 AM

When you’re walking in the rain,
No one knows that you’re crying.
When you hide it on the outside,
No one knows that on the inside, you’re dying

But should you wait until it rains to cry?
Should you hide it if inside you’re starting to die?

Some say it’s the coolest thing you can do,
Others say that it’s not good for you.
But I say just let it out-
If you want to sob, cry,
If you want to scream, shout.

Someone is always on your side-
Don’t try telling me that I lied.
‘Cause you know I’m always there for you-
You’re why I do the things I do.

mixed fighter girl · Jun 21, 2006, 11:13 AM

O_O wow....i really like it ^^ it makes me feel i don't know gow to explain it but it's a good poem..keep it up.

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 11:23 AM

thanks a lot! i'm glad that someone replied

confused · Jun 21, 2006, 11:27 AM

^^..awsome..^^ nice nice nice ^^

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 11:34 AM

thankies! this was my third poem out of four that i wrote in three days. as of now, the forth is unposted

Rei_unit00 · Jun 21, 2006, 11:38 AM

jeez, I seriously just got goosebumps from reading that...
awesome

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 11:41 AM

is that supposed to be good? lol- thats not exactly the effect i was going for, but thanks a lot!

Rei_unit00 · Jun 21, 2006, 11:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by forever a dreamer

is that supposed to be good? lol- thats not exactly the effect i was going for, but thanks a lot!

yeah, it's a good thing

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 11:50 AM

alright, i wasnt quite sure, so thanks a lot!

The Fighter · Jun 21, 2006, 12:12 PM

WOW! Nice poem! Dude only crys when it rains, I would say thats the emotion in the poem! Keeep it up! ^_^ It was a well put together poem!

forever a dreamer · Jun 21, 2006, 12:15 PM

thanks! i'm starting to like this whole writing poems thing...

Jun 21, 2006, 10:40 AM	#1 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Always There When you’re walking in the rain, No one knows that you’re crying. When you hide it on the outside, No one knows that on the inside, you’re dying But should you wait until it rains to cry? Should you hide it if inside you’re starting to die? Some say it’s the coolest thing you can do, Others say that it’s not good for you. But I say just let it out- If you want to sob, cry, If you want to scream, shout. Someone is always on your side- Don’t try telling me that I lied. ‘Cause you know I’m always there for you- You’re why I do the things I do. __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
mixed fighter girl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: where the true warriors fight Posts: 251 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,275	Re: Always There O_O wow....i really like it ^^ it makes me feel i don't know gow to explain it but it's a good poem..keep it up. __________________ . I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Always There thanks a lot! i'm glad that someone replied __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:27 AM	#4 (permalink)
confused Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: sumwhere you dont kno :) Posts: 35 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Always There ^^..awsome..^^ nice nice nice ^^ __________________ kurisutin
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:34 AM	#5 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Always There thankies! this was my third poem out of four that i wrote in three days. as of now, the forth is unposted __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
Rei_unit00 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 143 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 210	Re: Always There jeez, I seriously just got goosebumps from reading that... awesome
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:41 AM	#7 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Always There is that supposed to be good? lol- thats not exactly the effect i was going for, but thanks a lot! __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Jun 21, 2006, 11:50 AM	#9 (permalink)
forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Always There alright, i wasnt quite sure, so thanks a lot! __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Jun 21, 2006, 12:12 PM	#10 (permalink)
The Fighter Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2006 Location: Streets of Compton, Posts: 274 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 506	Re: Always There WOW! Nice poem! Dude only crys when it rains, I would say thats the emotion in the poem! Keeep it up! ^_^ It was a well put together poem! __________________ \|The Kicks\| \|My AO Gallery\| \|Arcade\| \|5000 Thread\| \|SF vs. MK\|
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forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Always There thanks! i'm starting to like this whole writing poems thing... __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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