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Reply With QuoteNicely done! But as I was reading it... "You need to take a break
To get back up to a 90" <-----This part doesn't flow so smoothly in my opinion. However, I really like you poem overall. ^^
Always there
You’re depressed and lonely
You don’t want to be alone
Thinking that no one’s there
But you’re wrong
You think you aren’t the one
You don’t think we are meant to be
Wanting someone you can touch
Be with and see
Your grades are slipping
So are mine
You need to take a break
To get back up to a 90
So take the time you need
We won’t talk for a while
Or barely at all
Whatever happens
Know that I’ll always be there
Nicely done! But as I was reading it... "You need to take a break
To get back up to a 90" <-----This part doesn't flow so smoothly in my opinion. However, I really like you poem overall. ^^
yeah.. I know.. Thanks for your honesty. That means a lot to me. I'm glad you still liked it though. ^-^
You really got your rhymes down.........and excellent words!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!!!!!1
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Hmm... i wonder for who this poem is
nicely done and i agree with tifa... that part dont go nicely.. :/
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I agree with Tifa as well but good job anyways I like it! keep up the good work!
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