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    Am I alone?

    I get a funny feeling,
    it comes from deep inside.
    I get all mad and angry,
    wanting to go and hide.

    My doctor calls it depression,
    my dad says it's just me.
    But the thoughts and feelings,
    no one will ever be able to see.

    Some say I'm psycho,
    some say I'm just weird.
    It's like I'm a different person,
    and the old me just disappeared.

    I get really edgy,
    I want to commit suicide real bad.
    Then I get a headache,
    followed by feeling sad.

    I wish I could get help,
    I wish it would go away.
    Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
    it will some day.

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    Re: Am I alone?

    Ahh, you stick to your point ^_^ The theme/idea is hoplesness right? The poem clearly mentions that. Nice job!

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    Re: Am I alone?

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    Some say I'm psycho,
    some say I'm just weird.
    It's like I'm a different person,
    and the old me just disappeared.

    I get really edgy,
    I want to commit suicide real bad.
    Then I get a headache,
    followed by feeling sad.
    This part was real to me... My life is like this. If you wrote this because its really how you feel... than know this... YOU'RE NOT ALONE.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Am I alone?

    Oi, i know how you feel. i git like that a lot. your not alone. it's a nice poem too BTW

    I believe…whatever doesn't kill you simply makes you…stranger.
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