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Reply With QuoteLol... some one is having a big crush there..
It's still good.. but is suggest you put methaphores... ^^ will be more...poetic that way..
Been long since you post a poem man..sheesh write more~!XD
I ADORE YOUUU!!!!!!!!
You are an amazing person.
You put up with the true me for awhile and I am happy for that.
You opened up my heart.
Even if we’re having ups and downs,
you still comfort me and sometimes you probably don't even realize it.
You are kind, have a warm heart, you are loving and caring...
you're basically my angel.
These something I can't even point out the pulls my love to you.
It feels like I love you more than I've any person before.
I fell in love with you during the time of me just meeting you.
I knew it was early, but I also knew it was true and it's still is.
I love you and I mean from deep with in my heart.
I know I have been immature,
[at times].
I am more than glad to have you with me, to have you love me,
and you chose me instead of those guys.
I just don’t know how grateful I am to be able to love you in the first place.
I just don’t want to loose you, and I can’t tell you what I feel towards you, it’s just so … warm … unexplainable feelings I have for you.
I don’t want you to be stuck with me.
I want to make you feel contempt, and not just “happy”.
I don’t want temporary exultance for you; either,
I want to make you safe, warm and loved for as long as I can.
And hey … those guys who like you … they don’t even know what love is,
or what they want from you in the first place.
I may be wrong, but they only want you because of their materialistic desires … and for what you are, not who you are.
I may not be rich or have high social status.
But I do have a lot of respect for you,
Plenty of love in store to keep you smiling and beautiful.
One thing I have realized with you is that love is like water. Because it becomes what you mix in it or put it into; it takes it form, likewise.
If you keep it in your hands closely and securely,
it will remain there, but I don’t want it to grab onto it.
Otherwise it would leak out.
It may sound lame to you and all that,
but I need you to keep the water from escaping.
-"For JS", the one it hurts to leave
Lol... some one is having a big crush there..
It's still good.. but is suggest you put methaphores... ^^ will be more...poetic that way..
Been long since you post a poem man..sheesh write more~!
Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
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Re: Amalgamated Feelings [II] Wow...
Sad yet...so beautiful at the same time. She's lucky to have someone like you ^_^
Well, The poem was like a story to me...yet it was very poetic at the same time.
I hope everything goes well Rave.
Keep it up! I hope to read more from you...or else...
-x- Zainab -x-
Haha, wow thank you! ^_^Originally Posted by ihauntforlust
Wow...
Sad yet...so beautiful at the same time. She's lucky to have someone like you ^_^
Well, The poem was like a story to me...yet it was very poetic at the same time.
I hope everything goes well Rave
Keep it up! I hope to read more from you...or else...
-x- Zainab -x-
I know it's sad, but you must really be able to decipher this quite good, because my poem isn't that beautiful!
Lucky? Meh, I doubt it. Insolent? Maybe; and I see this poem is pair of opposites x3
And ... or else what? O.o
Crush?Lol... some one is having a big crush there..
It's still good.. but is suggest you put methaphores... ^^ will be more...poetic that way..
Been long since you post a poem man..sheesh write more~!Literally, YES!!
And this is a special poem, because it doesn't use much metaphors in the first place. And it has been a while, yup!
she gonna rape u man... *hides* @.@ xD jk..
ahh...i c... "special"
I like this saying though... this is very true...
"One thing I have realized with you is that love is like water. Because it becomes what you mix in it or put it into; it takes it form, likewise."
Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
I'm BACK AO!
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My Siggy is in progress... just you wait... :3
Mhmm x3 This is also the very first time I have used my philosophy in my poems. Another reason why this is special.
Metaphors aren't usually my thing, those feelings just come.
I agree with this.
It's a lovely poem. I really like the imagery. Keep up the great work. [:
Hmm, thank you~!
I appreciate all your comments, thanks, guys ad girls x3 And if you have any suggestions, please do tell!
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