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    *america Under Attack*

    Why must we fight, its just not right.
    Two countries at war, one rich one poor.
    Why can't we make amends, why can't we be friends?
    The pain and the terror both countries go through
    Just isen't enough to prove whos who.
    One must win, in this horrible tradgedy, why can't anyone see what's reality?
    Family's torn apart...
    Together they'll mourn
    Through feelings and heart.
    No one understands the pain thats here with me
    They can't understand what they cant see.
    When the twin towers went down
    Loved ones were lost
    And still not found
    Some buried alive
    Buried deep in the debris
    This could have been anyone
    This could have been me!
    But everyday i pray and keep them in my thoughts
    For this could have been prevented this could have been fought.
    It's to late now; out reaction was not in time
    For this is our country land of the free
    It's not turning out how i thought it would be.
    Our counrty is dying the red, white and blue
    This isn't a dream it's incredibly true.
    As our country goes to war
    We'll proudly stand
    And give a helping hand.
    One country must win whether it be of heart or of sin.
    In god we trust
    And if this is true
    War is definitly not a must!
    If we belive in faith
    True miracles can come true
    Though an act of war is something we shouldent do.
    So take your time and think this through...
    There could be another way
    Although i will pray and pray
    For those who have lost friends and family along the way
    For those who have been injured
    And those who cant be cured
    For this i give my word!

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: *america Under Attack*

    sounds cool...and its also nice to see people supporting peace...

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    Re: *america Under Attack*

    I love your poem Hiei it touches my heart. If only everyone would think this way. Our world would be alot better off if there was no more war.
    ™Mommy To Micah And Shawn!™


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    Re: *america Under Attack*

    Correct punctuation and proper spacing would do this poem jutice.
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