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    Angel!!

    Her eye's are darkest brown
    they can penatrate the hardest
    soul . When she she stares at you
    you can tell, she is an Angel.

    Her hair it matches her eyes
    you cant help but be hypnotised
    it flows to the small of her back
    i swear she could give you a heart attack.

    Her skin is lovely and when she holds you
    hand it single the tingle to your spine ,no
    other girl can compare to her ,they try
    but they walk away in tears.

    Her reflection on the water cast's
    a spell on you, she has the biggest heart
    out of all of you ,theres nothing i can say
    that can really do her justice but with these
    words i trust that you will know.

    her slinder look it can kill at 20 paces
    you think im joking but there is no other
    like her .and if sounds like i am being obssesive
    its not im only confessing. she's an angel and
    she has a place in your heart. and also mine ....

    i did this poem for a very awesome friend i hope she
    likes it.
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 26, 2006 at 12:22 AM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Angel!!

    OMG Dark THAT IS SOOOOOOOO SWEET!!!!!!! That is the sweetest poem someone has ever written about me! *hugs Dark* ur the best!!!! I hope I meet more people like you in my life because you are a rare one!

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    Re: Angel!!

    Awwww two lovebirds flying together ^.^ awesome poem! -^ ^-

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    Aww how cute! That poem was so sweet Chris!
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    Re: Angel!!

    im glad you liked it and im sure you will find somone else like me
    out there. and your right rave two love birds thats what this poem
    is about and i hope she finds the guy she deserves. love at her age is
    am awesome thing but its also trying but you live and learn.and thanks
    hieislove glad you liked it . i hope to make others like this but
    this was my first
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 26, 2006 at 07:28 AM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Angel!!

    wow, it's your first? well you did an awesome job. It's so sweet!!!! Keep it up!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Angel!!

    Go Chalice! *does chefy poo victory dance*

    You are just getting so good! I'm glowing with excitement! I want to see how super awesome you get! And that person seems like an awesome friend!

    Her eye's are darkest brown
    they can penatrate the hardest
    soul . When she she stares at you
    you can tell, she is an Angel.


    This opening made me melt! Its so beautiful!

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Angel!!

    you know it still amazes me that there are still some guys in the world that have respect for ladies! Chris your awsome! nice poem! you need to give respecting lessons!
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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