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    Angel Eyes

    I poem I wrote in 2004

    I remember when

    I looked into

    Your angel eyes

    I saw your soul

    Full of sorrow

    And it's lifeless

    Your immortal soul

    Can't take the sadness

    That you suffered

    You tell me everything

    Like you are happy

    But your not

    You're lying to yourself

    I can tell because I

    Glazed into your

    "Angel Eyes"
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    Re: Angel Eyes

    Took me several re-reads to understand, but I get the message you are sending out! Seeeing his soul and what not. Good trippy poem! lol. Keep your work up!

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    Re: Angel Eyes

    Nice ^_^ I like it, and the meaning is clear, good job!

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    Re: Angel Eyes

    it's got a different layout fir the poem structure.....might be a lil confusing to the reader but the work itself is good.........knowing tht he is suffering but unwilling to open n share tht burden......good poem...look forward to reading more

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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