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Reply With QuoteTook me several re-reads to understand, but I get the message you are sending out! Seeeing his soul and what not. Good trippy poem! lol. Keep your work up!
I poem I wrote in 2004
I remember when
I looked into
Your angel eyes
I saw your soul
Full of sorrow
And it's lifeless
Your immortal soul
Can't take the sadness
That you suffered
You tell me everything
Like you are happy
But your not
You're lying to yourself
I can tell because I
Glazed into your
"Angel Eyes"
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
Took me several re-reads to understand, but I get the message you are sending out! Seeeing his soul and what not. Good trippy poem! lol. Keep your work up!
Nice ^_^ I like it, and the meaning is clear, good job!
it's got a different layout fir the poem structure.....might be a lil confusing to the reader but the work itself is good.........knowing tht he is suffering but unwilling to open n share tht burden......good poem...look forward to reading more
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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