Shinigami's_Angel

Here's a poem that I wrote a few days ago.I wrote in my journal since I was bored.So I thought I might as well put it up here and see whatever one thinks of it. Hope everybody likes it.Please comment,thanks




Title-Angel's Night


Night is Beauty
Day is Light
And just to Bright
Screaming winds
Drown all sound

Blood boiling
Never ending
Screams of terror
Rain that turns into blades

Waterfalls
Turn into floods
Waves
Come forth to incase us all

Night is nothing but Beauty
Day is nothing but a Light that is to Bright
Winds that scream the names of all that are lost
Sound that may never be heard of again

Blood may pour from the sky
Never ending Red
Rain of danceing blades

Dark Clouds
Thunder and Lightning
Winds that scream out all of our pain
River's that flood
Come above and chase us away

Beauty of the Night
Angel of sweet death
Come forth with you judgement
What will be your answer

Angel of death will claim us all
Maybe some sooner,than later
We may all never know
The answer we all seem to seek....

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Ju jitsu Dan

Angel of death will claim us all
Maybe some sooner,than later
We may all never know
The answer we all seem to seek....

i like the end paragraph,maybe the ansesers we all seek are in death....u do have a way with words,i think its realy great like the rest of your work.how long does it take u to write them?or dont u think about it your realy good and thats a realy good poem.

dont get me wrong but i think all the greatest poem writers story writers music writers all thre greats are slightly mad you seem to do a lot of morbid stuff you must base them on something inportant to u,that i what makes your poems so powerfull,exspealy to me cos i can relate lol

keep it up!

Shinigami's_Angel

Wow! Thanks for the truely awesome comment Ju jitsu Dan

Well sometimes it takes me a few days or just a few minutes lol
Yes.I mostly write what i'm feeling on the inside at the moment.
And this poem right here,I kinda just wrote it cause I was bored if you can believe it lol.I just wrote whatever came 2 mind and what felt right.

But thank you Ju jitsu Dan Your wonderful comment has made me very happy with my work. It's nice 2 know that some people enjoy my work.

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civildragon

shini that was an awsome poem u wrote cool so far yr doing good on poem.

fayt lingod

thats really good.

just try to stray away from teh darker theme. most pplz don't like it.

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Shinigami's_Angel

Thank you very much Civil


Thanks Fayt lingod And i'll try lol

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Baal

Darn how u make such nice poems.
pretty rimy i like it a lot.

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perdoname michelle!

HieisLove

Yet another I like that you wrote! Keep it up!

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Shinigami's_Angel

Thank you very much Baal

Wow,thank you sooo much HieisLove Happy that you like my work.

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