Aw. Such a sad poem.The description is beautiful. Exactly how I would like people to describe love. Nice job ^^
Angelic Demons
I touched the sky,
It shivered against my flesh.
I saw a beautiful god,
Cursed was I in his sight.
I bathed in love,
An emotion best forgotten.
I loved the silent night,
Reminiscence of a memory.
Angels stared and watched,
As I took the blade to heart.
Flesh broke in their light,
As I swore to breathe no more.
Darkness crept around,
As angelic tears fell to earth.
The harmony of trumpets faded,
And warm light grew to cold.
Suffocation breathed new life,
A world of hate and fear,
Searing black coals and tar
Burned intensity unbearable.
I saw loved ones as I wept.
Tears dissolved into the heat.
Extinguishing only relief,
of forever burning cheeks.
How I begged and bargained,
Pleaded and cried out.
I was nothing, no more.
No skin or bone or organ.
No dreams, no thought.
No love, no life.
No nothing,
Only pain.
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Aw. Such a sad poem.The description is beautiful. Exactly how I would like people to describe love. Nice job ^^
emotion best forgotten? i thought more ppl like to remember it... @.@
Hmm.. nice poem btw...the tittle really goes with the poem ^^
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Think. If someone mentions "Love" and say it's best forgotten, then what is implied? It's implied that something went wrong and they were hurt.. come on.. don't just read the words, listen to the meaning.
And this poem isn't about love. It's about death.
"Forever burning cheeks"
What does that imply.
The poems describes a transistion from Life to death and the fear of hell.
Although, thanks for the compliments.
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