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    Angels

    Angels

    Listen to me
    My angels
    Grant me my wings
    The ability to fly

    So that I can see
    My true love
    Fly over the seas
    Take him in my arms
    Do as I please

    Let me go where I want to go
    See what I want to see
    Show the one I love
    The beauty of a sunset filled sea

    Give me the power to heal my arm
    The cuts I put there a few hours ago
    Forgive me for all my sins
    Or at least give me my love

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    Re: Angels

    @.@ wow... this is nicely done... love the ending... the flow is very good... i love it... though it is very simple..but still good

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    Re: Angels

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    @.@ wow... this is nicely done... love the ending... the flow is very good... i love it... though it is very simple..but still good
    i agree with you Ray^^
    it's a simple and nice poem
    good job AngelicDemon^^
    keep up the good work

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    Re: Angels

    Thanks. ^-^ I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to write more but my poems don't seem to be the same anymore.

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    Re: Angels

    Once again, a nice poem. Loveable to read. Hehe, yes, you should try other styles of poems. ^^

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    Re: Angels

    Awww.........this was really sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Thank you. ^-^ I'm glad you like it. Alright Tifa. ^-^ I'll try other styles of writing.

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