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    Angels fly together.

    Title is totally irrelevant.

    A band of angels standing high
    one shatters, tumbles from the sky
    his wings are torn from winds too wild
    it's falling deep, this heaven's child

    It's looking round, but spotting none
    heaven's guiding hand is gone
    the final tears are floating way
    it's falling faster down it's way.

    It shatters, hitting mortal's space
    the sun is shining in it's face
    the world seems cold, so lost inside
    the angel's found no place to hide.

    Wandering under human kind
    it's just the winds left far behind
    heaven's face is still on her
    heaven's beauty, everywhere.

    Where she may be, I feel her still
    I'm touching heaven's might at will
    the angel, yes, it had a name
    It's you - the love I still acclaim

    Also works as a song : D

    Be nice ;_;

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    Re: Angels fly together.

    I like how your poem speaks with great fondness of someone who is being referred as an angel. I mean some people might think comparing to an angel is a little cliche, but I think it's good. The whole idea of describing all the detailed surroundings was very well thought.

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    Re: Angels fly together.

    Thanks for the feedback.
    Appreciate the comment ;D

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    Re: Angels fly together.

    This isn't yours. I found the same poem here, posted over a month ago, in both German and English:

    Schall's most awesome poems - StickpagePortal Forums

    And please don't try to tell me it's a matter of you posting this on a different site, because someone with the EXACT same avatar, biography info, and homepage as you posted a response to this poem.

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