Angel of death will claim us all
Maybe some sooner,than later
We may all never know
The answer we all seem to seek....
i like the end paragraph,maybe the ansesers we all seek are in death....u do have a way with words,i think its realy great like the rest of your work.how long does it take u to write them?or dont u think about it your realy good and thats a realy good poem.
dont get me wrong but i think all the greatest poem writers story writers music writers all thre greats are slightly mad you seem to do a lot of morbid stuff you must base them on something inportant to u,that i what makes your poems so powerfull,exspealy to me cos i can relate lol
keep it up!