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    Angel's Night

    Here's a poem that I wrote a few days ago.I wrote in my journal since I was bored.So I thought I might as well put it up here and see whatever one thinks of it. Hope everybody likes it.Please comment,thanks




    Title-Angel's Night


    Night is Beauty
    Day is Light
    And just to Bright
    Screaming winds
    Drown all sound

    Blood boiling
    Never ending
    Screams of terror
    Rain that turns into blades

    Waterfalls
    Turn into floods
    Waves
    Come forth to incase us all

    Night is nothing but Beauty
    Day is nothing but a Light that is to Bright
    Winds that scream the names of all that are lost
    Sound that may never be heard of again

    Blood may pour from the sky
    Never ending Red
    Rain of danceing blades

    Dark Clouds
    Thunder and Lightning
    Winds that scream out all of our pain
    River's that flood
    Come above and chase us away

    Beauty of the Night
    Angel of sweet death
    Come forth with you judgement
    What will be your answer

    Angel of death will claim us all
    Maybe some sooner,than later
    We may all never know
    The answer we all seem to seek....
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    Re: Angel's Night

    Angel of death will claim us all
    Maybe some sooner,than later
    We may all never know
    The answer we all seem to seek....

    i like the end paragraph,maybe the ansesers we all seek are in death....u do have a way with words,i think its realy great like the rest of your work.how long does it take u to write them?or dont u think about it your realy good and thats a realy good poem.

    dont get me wrong but i think all the greatest poem writers story writers music writers all thre greats are slightly mad you seem to do a lot of morbid stuff you must base them on something inportant to u,that i what makes your poems so powerfull,exspealy to me cos i can relate lol

    keep it up!

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    Wow! Thanks for the truely awesome comment Ju jitsu Dan

    Well sometimes it takes me a few days or just a few minutes lol
    Yes.I mostly write what i'm feeling on the inside at the moment.
    And this poem right here,I kinda just wrote it cause I was bored if you can believe it lol.I just wrote whatever came 2 mind and what felt right.

    But thank you Ju jitsu Dan Your wonderful comment has made me very happy with my work. It's nice 2 know that some people enjoy my work.
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    Re: Angel's Night

    shini that was an awsome poem u wrote cool so far yr doing good on poem.

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    Re: Angel's Night

    thats really good.

    just try to stray away from teh darker theme. most pplz don't like it.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Thank you very much Civil


    Thanks Fayt lingod And i'll try lol
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    Re: Angel's Night

    Darn how u make such nice poems.
    pretty rimy i like it a lot.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Angel's Night

    Yet another I like that you wrote! Keep it up!
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