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    Angles

    Angles
    Witch kind am I
    Am I the one who can take life?
    Or am I the kind who gives it?
    Do I sescort the dead to there final resting place?
    Or to a world of hate a flames?
    So witch one am I?
    Because there’s not enof time to pick so i don’t know witch
    To pick good or bad
    They both have consequences with there jobs
    so do I have to pick because and dose it have to be soon
    because I loved my life if I got it back
    to being a livening breathing person
    I wouldn’t take it for granted as I did
    it will be the best time I could have
    but its a petty I cant go back in time an live my life right
    then it wouldn’t be so hard to pick now.
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    Interesting way to write a poem! Good job on this one, I honestly wouldn't know what know what angle I was! Keep up the good work!

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    thank you and i will dont worry ^_^

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    a good poem, but unless you were trying to misspell every other word i would keep a dictionary close at hand

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    thank you sooOOooo much u dont know how much this means to me ^_^

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    mispell doesnt mean its a bad poem, this poem has potential and is very good, nice work

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    OMG thank you sooOooooo much cos lke i cant spell to save my live but i did use spell check

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