A heart shrouded in flames
The memories of an eternal love
Feeling of joy and bliss scorched
Never to be quenched by the tears of heaven
A rose that once bloomed red turned black
Once it's laid upon the casket of my emotions
Dreams of rising like the phoenix shattered
The ashes that once revived turned cold
Angels once held my heart near
Now serpents of you poison my heart
As the venom seeps through my veins
A once beating heart stops frozen and black
Thoughts of love flee my mind
The hatred sets in and forms a devil
One who will take you heart straight to hell
Allowing you to feel the torment and anguish
i love how th poem vents as you tell this person
how you feel hoping that they feel the same ,or hope that
somone does to them what they did to you so you can have
closure. that what i get from this poem and i like it aklot Bro
Wee! Imagery galore. Wonderful, I love the picture this poeem presents to me.
Very sad poem... I quite like your style... Nice...
HolderofTheDarkChalice, thanks for the awesome comment bro I truly appreciate it!
Kasai, if it wasn't for you and the clan I never would've realized the true potential in writing poems! Thank you guys!
SousukeSagara I appreciate you comment as well and I'm also a fan of your style! Thanks
i love your poem man, it was pretty nice.
Thanks for the comment I really appreciate it!
Thanks to all who posted comments on my poem, I truly appreciate it!