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    Exclamation Anguish

    A heart shrouded in flames
    The memories of an eternal love
    Feeling of joy and bliss scorched
    Never to be quenched by the tears of heaven

    A rose that once bloomed red turned black
    Once it's laid upon the casket of my emotions
    Dreams of rising like the phoenix shattered
    The ashes that once revived turned cold

    Angels once held my heart near
    Now serpents of you poison my heart
    As the venom seeps through my veins
    A once beating heart stops frozen and black

    Thoughts of love flee my mind
    The hatred sets in and forms a devil
    One who will take you heart straight to hell
    Allowing you to feel the torment and anguish

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    Re: Anguish

    i love how th poem vents as you tell this person
    how you feel hoping that they feel the same ,or hope that
    somone does to them what they did to you so you can have
    closure. that what i get from this poem and i like it aklot Bro
    very awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Anguish

    Wee! Imagery galore. Wonderful, I love the picture this poeem presents to me.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Anguish

    Very sad poem... I quite like your style... Nice...

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    Re: Anguish

    HolderofTheDarkChalice, thanks for the awesome comment bro I truly appreciate it!

    Kasai, if it wasn't for you and the clan I never would've realized the true potential in writing poems! Thank you guys!

    SousukeSagara I appreciate you comment as well and I'm also a fan of your style! Thanks

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    Re: Anguish

    i love your poem man, it was pretty nice.

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    Re: Anguish

    Hey Ketaro,

    Thanks for the comment I really appreciate it!

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    Re: Anguish

    Thanks to all who posted comments on my poem, I truly appreciate it!

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