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    *Animal Rights*

    I wrote this poem some time ago, I don't think it's that good. But its for the animals! XD

    Look into an abused ones eyes
    Tell me, what do you see?
    Sorrow, hurt, despair!
    This isn't how it should be

    Dancing bears are driven mad
    Elephants in confinement,
    Dogs in need of loving homes
    A kittens cry is now silent.

    They want to find their families
    They want to be free,
    Help keep the cruel people away
    Please just leave them be.

    The world will be a better place
    If animal rights succeeded,
    It will give animals the happiness
    That they have always needed.


    Not one of my better peices so constructive critisism is appreciated.

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: *Animal Rights*

    The world will be a better place
    If animal rights succeeded,
    W00t w00t! xD I Really Really! Really! Like those lines. ^-^ They caught my eyes.

    I myself, find human as animals, just pyhso ones. ^-^
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    Re: *Animal Rights*

    o_o .............. >_>
    ........... are we supposed to chant that as we march through cities?


    ^_^ ANIMAL RIGHTS!!! LOVE YOUR LITTLE FURRY BROTHA'S AND SISTA'S!!!!

    ........ and the bigger ones too, like Mr. Buffalo.

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    Re: *Animal Rights*

    ok, this poem is a lil bit weird, but it makes sense to me, nice job keep it up.

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    Re: *Animal Rights*

    I really liked it. It's a nice poem. I'm really into animal rights so that maybe one of the reasons I liked it so much.

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