W00t w00t! xD I Really Really! Really! Like those lines. ^-^ They caught my eyes.The world will be a better place
If animal rights succeeded,
I myself, find human as animals, just pyhso ones. ^-^
I wrote this poem some time ago, I don't think it's that good. But its for the animals! XD
Look into an abused ones eyes
Tell me, what do you see?
Sorrow, hurt, despair!
This isn't how it should be
Dancing bears are driven mad
Elephants in confinement,
Dogs in need of loving homes
A kittens cry is now silent.
They want to find their families
They want to be free,
Help keep the cruel people away
Please just leave them be.
The world will be a better place
If animal rights succeeded,
It will give animals the happiness
That they have always needed.
Not one of my better peices so constructive critisism is appreciated.
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
W00t w00t! xD I Really Really! Really! Like those lines. ^-^ They caught my eyes.The world will be a better place
If animal rights succeeded,
I myself, find human as animals, just pyhso ones. ^-^
o_o .............. >_>
........... are we supposed to chant that as we march through cities?
^_^ ANIMAL RIGHTS!!! LOVE YOUR LITTLE FURRY BROTHA'S AND SISTA'S!!!!
........ and the bigger ones too, like Mr. Buffalo.
ok, this poem is a lil bit weird, but it makes sense to me, nice job keep it up.
I really liked it. It's a nice poem. I'm really into animal rights so that maybe one of the reasons I liked it so much.![]()
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