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    another love poem which is nameless

    There I am with her,
    The sweat, smell, the warmth of her body.
    I could remember it, the feeling.
    That lost feeling to pleasure.
    When you just want it to never end.
    When you want to stay in it.

    We laid under the stars,
    Watching time go by
    Watching the stars
    While the brightest star was beside me,
    Cuddled beside me,
    I could feel her smooth skin,
    I could smell her hair,
    I could feel her body laid beside mine.
    The air was so peaceful,
    I could fall asleep beside her.

    We met by fate probaly,
    But I didn't care and
    Just went with the flow of Fate.
    I cared and made love to her,
    It felt so endless, yet it was so good.
    I was to be with her forever.

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    Re: another love poem which is nameless

    Nice Poem dude, really touching

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    Re: another love poem which is nameless

    That was pretty good.

    good job

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    Re: another love poem which is nameless

    This is the second poem on love that you posted, if I am correct, and I have to say that I like it a lot, bud! Really, you are improving a lot these days. ^^ Makes me feel jealous! But, I am happy to read all of your works, they make me learn a lot. ^^ Thanks for sharing your poems with all of us. Write more, and share more.

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    I hope Blade X does write more.
    Insperation and competition is so hard to find these days.

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    Blade you're a natural, you know

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    Re: another love poem which is nameless

    That was really good, you could have seperated the lines more. Instead of using commas.

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    Re: another love poem which is nameless

    Nice poem!

    Keep up the good work!

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