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    another one from death

    deal with the puncuation and misspelling its just my style

    smiting

    i go and smite down all things in my way
    my heart is torn in mulitply directions
    unknown to all i die slowly, but still fighting.
    i smite all that oppose me...
    i lock out all around me

    i fear that someone one day might get in and find out whats going on
    i fear for them, cause the truth is to horrid.
    im falling apart each day, with nothing to hold me together.
    i look to my freinds for help yet they shune me.
    im still fighting though, i never could give in.

    im still smiting those emotions and those that dare mock me
    but im slowly losing my ground, i am slowly losing my strength
    i fear for those around me.....i cannot be loved...
    its to much to ask of you all.
    i shall die alone, cause i dont want to hurt anyone....
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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    Re: another one from death

    i like how detailed it is, and the whole death theme was soooooo totally me a couple weeks ago, but thankfully now everything's going great for me, which is strange, but the poem is really good. you have talent.

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    Re: another one from death

    hey thanks! i do appreciate it.... ive gotten a bit down with everyone attack my poems due to lack of punctiation and spelling... and grammer.
    thanks again!
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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