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Reply With Quotei like how detailed it is, and the whole death theme was soooooo totally me a couple weeks ago, but thankfully now everything's going great for me, which is strange, but the poem is really good. you have talent.
deal with the puncuation and misspelling its just my style
smiting
i go and smite down all things in my way
my heart is torn in mulitply directions
unknown to all i die slowly, but still fighting.
i smite all that oppose me...
i lock out all around me
i fear that someone one day might get in and find out whats going on
i fear for them, cause the truth is to horrid.
im falling apart each day, with nothing to hold me together.
i look to my freinds for help yet they shune me.
im still fighting though, i never could give in.
im still smiting those emotions and those that dare mock me
but im slowly losing my ground, i am slowly losing my strength
i fear for those around me.....i cannot be loved...
its to much to ask of you all.
i shall die alone, cause i dont want to hurt anyone....
I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
i like how detailed it is, and the whole death theme was soooooo totally me a couple weeks ago, but thankfully now everything's going great for me, which is strange, but the poem is really good. you have talent.
hey thanks! i do appreciate it.... ive gotten a bit down with everyone attack my poems due to lack of punctiation and spelling... and grammer.
thanks again!
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
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