I like it. Very nice.
here is another poem of mine. plz enjoy!
Civil order will disappear-
As we fall into our fear.
We’ll be destroyed by our own hate.
We are home to the pandemonium gate.
Our Society crumbles, reality rumbles,
And we are blinded by fury.
Our problems are growing without us knowing-
That we are in too much of a hurry.
We have no patience for serenity,
So we will have an infinity-
Of pain, sorrow, sadness and worry.
A world without strife would panic-
If they saw our fate.
That world would scream as they beamed at our pandemonium gate.
When will we fall into despair,
Just like civilization before?
Now it seems like no one cares,
And pain is what we pour.
The next generation has no luck,
for all they must do is wait-
For once they are living their lives,
someone will open the pandemonium gate.
depressing, isn't it? for some reason i like depressing stuff. it's well. . . . . .depressing!
Yea. it's pretty sad. WHy so sad. i don't know, but the seem to touch people more.Originally Posted by BrightShadow_96
i just noticed- this poem is alot shorter than silent dreams. i shoulda made it longer. . . . . . maybe i will make it longer. . . . . .
Hey no matter if it is shorter...This poem is really good. Keep up the good work!