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    anymore

    i dont wanna live anymore
    i dont wanna worry no more
    i dont wanna be afraid no more
    i dont wanna be alone no more

    i dont wanna be antisocial no more
    i dont wanna be unloved no more
    i dont wanna wonder no more
    i dont wanna constintley sigh no more

    i hate this life of mine
    i cant stand being afraid
    of any one wanting to befriend
    i dont want to keep having
    suicidal tendencies and scary
    and/or disturbed thoughts
    and most of all i dont want to
    feal dissapointed in my self
    anymore

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    Re: anymore

    almost brought a tears to my eyes....do you really feel that way?good decribing of words though keep it ↑ ^^ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: anymore

    yes it is very truthful the most truthful of my poems unfortunately

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    Re: anymore

    *hugs you and holds you* will you tell me about it? *tighens my grip some* don't feel so bad.. pm me and we'll talk okay?

    It's a good poem and it does have good wording. i just wish it was so truthful....

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    Re: anymore

    well very nice poem i hope you get over your "deppressing"time and jamie stop flirting around with other ppl anywho very nice description lev. keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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    Re: anymore

    Hhmmm... it is a nice piece... hmm...but too many similar words... try to lengthen your use of verbs and methaphors..

    it's short and right to the point.. ^^ good job..

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    Re: anymore

    thanks everyone ray me the words where used consecutively for a reason thats what the theme if you will was for the poem and yes jamie i will pm u in a minute and thanks i luv my loser

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