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    Cool Ao

    This is a Poem I wrote about AO comments welcomed!

    AO

    Like a Phoenix rising from the ashes
    AO is the place that revives.
    Intense conversations about anime emerge
    New relationships and friendships formed.

    A place where writer can learn
    And potential formed
    Artist realize their talents and dreams
    Masterpieces soon formed with AO as the core.

    Living and breathing anime
    Body becomes excited and trembles.
    As new horizions are reached
    AO the land of anime where dreams peak.

    Like the Alpha and Omega
    Begining and End
    AO is the start
    AO is the End.

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    A poem about AO: wow!!!
    I was impressed on the your style of writing.
    I think no revisions are needed, the poem is good as it is.


    Like the Alpha and Omega
    Begining and End
    AO is the start
    AO is the End.

    these are the lines that capture my attention. i liked it.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Hey raja_psyche,

    thanks for the comment, and I hope more people like you will comment on this one! I wrote it for Soldatlife potw contest and I talked to Shini [Big Hugs] and decided to share with everyone.

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    great!
    i agree..
    where we can express our self about anime, manga, and all about it.!
    masterpiece.. good one.
    revision, repair, develop, addition, etc
    just like a life to alive.

    in my own word
    anime=life=bio
    hehe..

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    hey thats cool. norm in not into poems but thats cool
    OH CANADA MY HOME AND NATIVE LAND!!! *although i live in NOR CAL
    To all u Rockers out there... Rock on
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    hum! that was a nice poem.
    A place where writer can learn
    And potential formed
    Artist realize their talents and dreams
    Masterpieces soon formed with AO as the core
    this is my favorite stanza of your poem by the way.

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    very awesome poem bro and its true
    AO is where yuo will find any and all
    thing anime and manga ,and and learn
    how do poems as well, i still have problems with
    punctuation's and spelling but have been doing
    alot better since i joined ,AO is an awesome
    place for everything.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    I do agree with Ketaro,

    Artist realize their talents and dreams

    AO is my personal place for poetry and whatnot xD
    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
    Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME

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