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    AO poet.

    So when I write about heartbreak,
    Or being betrayed.
    Or I write about confusion,
    And being dismayed.

    Then at least you respond.
    With that, your feedback is given.
    But you complain that its depressing,
    Or I should do something different.

    So I did what you ask,
    But you didn't find it appealing.
    I wrote about clouds,
    And kids who color the ceiling.

    I wrote about a boy,
    And his love for bug collecting.
    But it seems you'd rather I complain.
    (Or I call it, "reflecting").

    You'd rather read about depression.
    Or self injurious behavior.
    You'd rather read all the desperate cries.
    Of those who need a savior.

    See most of us, we feed off pain.
    But few of us really know it.
    It all comes out in the reactions
    Of a creative AO poet.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: AO poet.

    Uhuh... sorry... I was quite depressed the day you posted those poems, so I decided not to comment, I couldn't possibly see their beauty, I tried to read them but they made me even sader... ^^ so sorry... I just know how you feel, I feel bad each time something like this happens to me too ^^ but it's just life... The main thing is not to give up and move on!!! ^^

    By the way, about this poem, I like the way you put your feelings and thoughts in a poem... it's great... wish I could do this, but I only write when I'm really sad or really, really happy- just when feelings take complete power over my mind...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: AO poet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I just know how you feel, I feel bad each time something like this happens to me too ^^ but it's just life... The main thing is not to give up and move on!!! ^^

    ...
    Yeah, I dont usually get bent out of shape if I get no replies on a poem. But it came as a shock when I tried so hard to step out of the box (because thats what people asked me to do).. and then I got.... nothing... What a slap in the face.

    I didn't even know if my new work was worth the effort.
    So I figure, might as well go back to my good ol' broken heart material.
    It seems depression is what works on this site?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: AO poet.

    I don't know... maybe... I haven't posted many happy poems... maybe it is true, though it's not really good...
    Don't turn your back on the happy ones though... just write both, post both, one for those who really are interested in poetry and one for those who just are looking for a place to hide...

    Yea... I guess it's quite hard for real poets one here... I'm just writing whenever I feel like and I don't wait for much, that's why I hadn't noticed this... I try to read everything.

    I read the one about the children painting the ceiling... it seemed quite funny to me... about the bugs I just couldn't understand at that time, about the clouds... have to go and read it!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: AO poet.

    not true i loved your other poems
    i just meant to go back and comment but never
    did they were really good , like that bugs poem
    i loved how the kid went wondering aimlessly
    out n to a dangerouse world not seeing what t
    the real world could be like.

    and mom always worrying and being
    protective anyway your poems are great
    and so was this one , and dont change a difrent
    mind set to please others do what comes from your
    heart and soul because if you went by what everyone
    else wanted to read it would be dull and dark .

    your way better than that
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: AO poet.

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    not true i loved your other poems
    i just meant to go back and comment but never
    did they were really good , like that bugs poem
    i loved how the kid went wondering aimlessly
    out n to a dangerouse world not seeing what t
    the real world could be like.

    and mom always worrying and being
    protective anyway your poems are great
    and so was this one , and dont change a difrent
    mind set to please others do what comes from your
    heart and soul because if you went by what everyone
    else wanted to read it would be dull and dark .

    your way better than that
    Have I ever told you that you are one of my favorite people on here?...
    Well, you are. When you comment on my work, its like you're looking into my soul.

    Im your #1 fan... and if you have others who like you as much as I do, let me know... so I can find them and destroy them!!!

    (that was a joke)
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    lol thats cool your a fan and
    i really do like your poems there
    really great and your soul is really
    one of a kind i like that alot.

    and so far your my only fan lol
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: AO poet.

    Im not your only fan! Pish posh! People on AO love you! ~Besides, Im more than a fan.. Im a friend.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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