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    Apparition

    I see her standing there,
    staring. Why does she not answer to my calls?
    All I wish is to hear her enchanting voice
    say my name.
    I call and call until my breath runs away from my chest.
    Why.
    Now I still say goodbye,
    with one tear drop in my eye.
    Goodbye.



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    Re: Apparition

    aww that poem is pretty
    my fav part is All I wish is to hear her enchanting voice
    say my name.
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Apparition

    It was short but interesting...the smilies w/ violins add up to the beauty...

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