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Reply With QuoteLovely imagery and short and to the point. Only suggestion I can think of is to change the word "amidst" in the forth line to midst. I think it would flow better that way.
Astray of the Night
Flawlessly winding in bliss
Drifting towards love
Alternately swaying in the midst of happiness
The astray of the night found itself momentarily full of love
Last edited by Eizhen; Apr 07, 2010 at 02:11 AM.
Lovely imagery and short and to the point. Only suggestion I can think of is to change the word "amidst" in the forth line to midst. I think it would flow better that way.
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