Man how did I miss this... I normally come looking for your poems, just to see what creativeness you had came up with today & to also know how you feel, what you felt, what's on your mind; ya' know what you be thinking at times... But my mother said "don't try to figure out a woman, cause by the time you have you'd be dead"... lol ^_^
Now you already know that your writing speaks to me in a whole new language, which I want to learn...
See I would quote a stanza/line, but I love the whole poem... Well I guess I'll quote one maybe two...
"I didn't make the cut.
I stumbled through my audition.
So badly I wanted to be in his "forever" vision."
&
"She followed no rules.
Yet she got the part.
Leading lady of his forever... holder of his heart."
These two right there lets me know what love can make a person do & what "rules" love follow... In which you hit the nail right on the head... none <All is fair in the war of love> A person can do the right things, say the right things, act on the right things, & still end up on the wrong end of love... But in all I love the whole poem... I wish he can see what I can see or better yet I wished I had someone who would audition for me... ^_^ I had to throw that back at cha' cause you hit me with one earlier... lol' ^_^


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