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    Audition

    I didn't make the cut.
    I stumbled through my audition.
    So badly I wanted to be in his "forever" vision.

    I wore the right attire.
    I memorized the script.
    I gave him all I had, although once or twice I slipped.

    She showed up all late.
    Me, I stood in line.
    He called her in before me, although she stood behind.

    She followed no rules.
    Yet she got the part.
    Leading lady of his forever... holder of his heart.

    That was my dream role.
    The audition? .... My life plan.
    If Im not his leading lady, I guess Im just a fan.

    I guess its not my destiny...
    What more is there to say?
    Should I find another movie. And, another role to play?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Audition

    Man how did I miss this... I normally come looking for your poems, just to see what creativeness you had came up with today & to also know how you feel, what you felt, what's on your mind; ya' know what you be thinking at times... But my mother said "don't try to figure out a woman, cause by the time you have you'd be dead"... lol ^_^

    Now you already know that your writing speaks to me in a whole new language, which I want to learn...

    See I would quote a stanza/line, but I love the whole poem... Well I guess I'll quote one maybe two...

    "I didn't make the cut.
    I stumbled through my audition.
    So badly I wanted to be in his "forever" vision."

    &

    "She followed no rules.
    Yet she got the part.
    Leading lady of his forever... holder of his heart."

    These two right there lets me know what love can make a person do & what "rules" love follow... In which you hit the nail right on the head... none <All is fair in the war of love> A person can do the right things, say the right things, act on the right things, & still end up on the wrong end of love... But in all I love the whole poem... I wish he can see what I can see or better yet I wished I had someone who would audition for me... ^_^ I had to throw that back at cha' cause you hit me with one earlier... lol' ^_^

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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