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Reply With QuoteI think you did an awesome job writing this poem! I don't see any errors and I definitely didn't figure out that you wanted the last line to refer back to the title! lol!Hope to see more work from the famed Jaderabbit!
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Autumn Winds
Dreams ignite in the night time air
Feelings disipate into dispair
Timely passion forgets regret
Mainly hendering fate per fret
All chords sing of happiness
Knightly the night fights mortality
A battle of light and dark
A song of Orange and Blue
All eyes notice my little red ballon
So charasmatic an carefree
Night and day means nothing
As time and I pass away
Here In My little Park
Of Hope and Dispair
Me and my little red ballon
Will drift away on these...
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Goes with my fall wallpaper, maybe has tons of clues to what my wallpaper has in it o.o for my competitors
WEll the ending is meant for you to refer back to the title.... for those that didn't get the ending and are just reading this lol
-Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-|THE INFAMOUS CHEETOS OVERLORD||IceNineKills|
I think you did an awesome job writing this poem! I don't see any errors and I definitely didn't figure out that you wanted the last line to refer back to the title! lol!
Well done Jaderabbit! Nice poem! I can kinda see the wallpaper that you're gonna do. Keep working on it!
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Thanks you so very much, yeah the poem goes to the bottom then back to the top and repeats itself... its a never ending poem >_<
-Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-|THE INFAMOUS CHEETOS OVERLORD||IceNineKills|
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