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    Autumn Wind Poem


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    Autumn Winds

    Dreams ignite in the night time air
    Feelings disipate into dispair
    Timely passion forgets regret
    Mainly hendering fate per fret

    All chords sing of happiness
    Knightly the night fights mortality
    A battle of light and dark
    A song of Orange and Blue

    All eyes notice my little red ballon
    So charasmatic an carefree
    Night and day means nothing
    As time and I pass away

    Here In My little Park
    Of Hope and Dispair
    Me and my little red ballon
    Will drift away on these...


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    Goes with my fall wallpaper, maybe has tons of clues to what my wallpaper has in it o.o for my competitors

    WEll the ending is meant for you to refer back to the title.... for those that didn't get the ending and are just reading this lol
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    Re: Autumn Wind Poem

    I think you did an awesome job writing this poem! I don't see any errors and I definitely didn't figure out that you wanted the last line to refer back to the title! lol! Hope to see more work from the famed Jaderabbit!

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    Re: Autumn Wind Poem

    Well done Jaderabbit! Nice poem! I can kinda see the wallpaper that you're gonna do. Keep working on it!
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    Re: Autumn Wind Poem

    Thanks you so very much, yeah the poem goes to the bottom then back to the top and repeats itself... its a never ending poem >_<
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