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    Awake

    while awake i see a light growing dimmer day and night
    i stay awake to feel my pain i walk alone inside im stained
    dodging in silence i sow my own path staying awake as the night burns fast
    waiting and hoping that life is still new awake i stay forever cursed
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    this is an interesting peice. the dynamic between reality and dreams is minimally explored in poetry and this is may be the first piece I have read concerning this matter.

    the contrast between the two seem as tho to intertwine with each other not to overpowering and yet not to mello
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    thank you two i just try to write as my heart tells it. its not that the relativity between reality and dreams is more of a metaphor for ones annoyance at the slow creep of life and all its twist and turns
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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