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    Awakening

    Hello members of AO
    I had just made like my first poem and I want your opinion about it.
    Also if you think I change the title because I'm not to sure about it
    well any way here it is

    Awakening

    When evil rules all,
    an awakening voice from inside calls.
    Those destined
    will listen
    and save the world from evils deep intentions

    From the depths of the forrests
    to the highest peek of a mountain
    and from the desert sands
    to the vast oacens

    The destined will come and awaken all
    to the true call.

    Well thats it hope you liked it

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    Re: Awakening

    Hey your getting it.
    Nice work.
    Keep it up.

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    Re: Awakening

    Thank alot and I support your manga

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    Re: Awakening

    Thanks alot.
    I guess were supportive./heh

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    Re: Awakening

    awesome peom, it was really kool, keep it up.

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    you r supportive I think any way

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    Re: Awakening

    Wow! Another unique poem that I read today. I truly love it, from start to finish. You did a great job!!!!! As for the title, it suits perfectly, so if you ask me, I will ask you to keep it. A title is meant to offer the reader the overall meaning of the poem, and yours did do that. Keep up the amazing, and I hope to see more.

    ^_^

    -Kedar-

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    Re: Awakening

    Coola keep it up!

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