Thread: Awakening

Hello members of AO
I had just made like my first poem and I want your opinion about it.
Also if you think I change the title because I'm not to sure about it
well any way here it is

Awakening

When evil rules all,
an awakening voice from inside calls.
Those destined
will listen
and save the world from evils deep intentions

From the depths of the forrests
to the highest peek of a mountain
and from the desert sands
to the vast oacens

The destined will come and awaken all
to the true call.

Well thats it hope you liked it