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![]() NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,170 | Awakening Hello members of AO I had just made like my first poem and I want your opinion about it. Also if you think I change the title because I'm not to sure about it well any way here it is Awakening When evil rules all, an awakening voice from inside calls. Those destined will listen and save the world from evils deep intentions From the depths of the forrests to the highest peek of a mountain and from the desert sands to the vast oacens The destined will come and awaken all to the true call. Well thats it hope you liked it ![]() |
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Warrior Monk Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Monk Society
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![]() ![]() Credits: 17,275 | Re: Awakening Wow! Another unique poem that I read today. I truly love it, from start to finish. You did a great job!!!!! As for the title, it suits perfectly, so if you ask me, I will ask you to keep it. A title is meant to offer the reader the overall meaning of the poem, and yours did do that. Keep up the amazing, and I hope to see more. ^_^ -Kedar-
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I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,887 | Re: Awakening Coola keep it up!
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