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Reply With Quotevery good i like it .very emotional and i love the feelings............can't wait for more
keep it ↑♥~*The Princess*~♥
I have written in awhile...sorry but this one is a bit short...I hope you like it though ^-^
This place is dim and the people are dull witted.
My hand finds my hair, tugging slightly the top of
my scalp lifts and butterflies barrel out like a tornado.
My body tremors as I land at the end of the rabbit
hole, my skin is snow, and my eyes are coal.
I seek to find your warming touch and eyes of green-gold,
just look in the dark and you will find my melting hand.
Dear Dinah...
very good i like it .very emotional and i love the feelings............can't wait for more
keep it ↑
Yeah, Bye.
Thankies...the only thing I hate about it is that it was so short...but then again some of the greatest poems ever were shorter.
Dear Dinah...
Hmmm... Short, but yet beautifully well written... I liked the "eyes are coal" part, such dark sadness... Keep up the good work short or long I will love to read more...
Thank you very much ^-^ I appreciate your thoughts...it helps alot
Dear Dinah...
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