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    Baby the way you made me

    Here I stand with you
    Hand in hand
    Your scent I breathe;
    Your voice I hear;
    You I love to stare at;

    Your beautiful pink lips
    I crave to kiss
    I watch the glow in your eyes
    A prefect picture you would be

    To hold you in my arms;
    To hears your cries of pleasure;
    To watch your flushed face;
    How crazy in love I am over you

    Baby, do you realize you make feel this way?
    My heart beats faster;
    I cannot breathe;
    Your stunning looks have caught me

    You who is taking my heart away
    Baby I do not know how long I will last
    I touch the softness of you’re pale beautiful skin
    My name you whispered before I kissed your lips

    My fingers run though your hair
    Your thin fingers run down my back
    An eternity we stand here
    Sharing a kiss that no other would ever
    From your lips as you, whisper my name
    Yumiko

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    Wow. I enjoyed this one very much. Keep up the good work.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    Wow Yumiko! good poem! I love it and I know who you were thinking about when you wrote it
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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    Hehe Love the poem is so sweet!

    Love you forever Yumiko!

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    Great poem expressing the love you feel for that other person you had in mind! Keep up the outstanding work!

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    love like this is very cool your lucky to have if you find someone
    this speecail , and the poem sort of reminds me alot of my self in
    someways when i had a gf . very awesome i loved the poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    awww yumiko and bou sitting the tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g *giggles*
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: Baby the way you made me

    *laughs* shut up Cierra.

    @bou- love you too bou

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