back together

lone w · Mar 12, 2007, 03:54 AM

I need and want you back
I love you enough to ask for you to think about it
enough feelings and brais,i know it's what I lack
I know I a problems and you had you fit

We may have broke up,but I still think about you
you still dont like me but yet you stalk about me
I am running out of patience ,I only have a few
I want you back,cant you see

Every night and day
Every time I open my eyes I see you
I dont care what you say
we have the same things in common,I know we do

I need you back
I want you back

*hellknight* · Mar 12, 2007, 09:47 AM

Not bad to express your feelings, I like the 2nd version, I had the same feeling like that before lol. keep it up and hope to see more.

*Peach_follows* · Mar 12, 2007, 01:12 PM

Try carfully re-reading your poems before you post...

Anyhow, looking past the spelling and gramatical errors. I can see where you're going with it.
Very cute.

Mar 12, 2007, 03:54 AM	#1 (permalink)
lone w Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: MAssachuessets Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	back together I need and want you back I love you enough to ask for you to think about it enough feelings and brais,i know it's what I lack I know I a problems and you had you fit We may have broke up,but I still think about you you still dont like me but yet you stalk about me I am running out of patience ,I only have a few I want you back,cant you see Every night and day Every time I open my eyes I see you I dont care what you say we have the same things in common,I know we do I need you back I want you back __________________ Lone W
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Mar 12, 2007, 09:47 AM	#2 (permalink)
hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,442 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,340	Re: back together Not bad to express your feelings, I like the 2nd version, I had the same feeling like that before lol. keep it up and hope to see more.
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Mar 12, 2007, 01:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,215	Re: back together Try carfully re-reading your poems before you post... Anyhow, looking past the spelling and gramatical errors. I can see where you're going with it. Very cute. __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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