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  1. Jun 26, 2007 08:33 AM #1
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    Bad

    you know youhave it bad when you hair is falling out at age 18
    you know you have it bad when where people say you need help
    you know you have it bad when you have razerblades that you dont shave with
    you know you have it bad when you have to wear long sleeves during the summer
    you know you have it bad when your lover leaves you becuase your crazy
    but you know what can make it all better






    money
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    Re: Bad

    I like this poem very much, it's soo... smart!!! ^^ I really enjoyed reading this!!!! It's short but makes a lot of sence and I can feel sarcasm in it too...

    A really nice work, I'm waiting forward to something more from you! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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    Re: Bad

    i dont like to write long stuff so i do short and simple thanks for the props
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  4. Jun 26, 2007 10:41 AM #4
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    Re: Bad

    love this poem, the way you ended it was so amazing, i think its great for a short poem which is something you dont see everyday


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