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    Barely Living

    I feel so empty
    Without a soul
    So cold and alone

    I want the comfort back
    The feeling of going home
    But I have that no more
    No where is safe for me

    Wish there was somewhere that could make feel right
    Get over the pain
    Get on with my life

    But it doesn't seem forth coming
    I have nothing
    No one
    I'm barely living
    Tapering off into the end
    I only want to die
    Want this all to end

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Barely Living

    aww sad but i like it i enjoyed reading it good job

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    Re: Barely Living

    Well done sounds like it could be a cry for love. Hope to read more.
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    Re: Barely Living

    For some reason I tend to like the dark poems. I do like your poem sound like they are crying out for help. If you ever want to talk I'm always here to listen or read . I hope to read more from you.

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    Re: Barely Living

    Hey Neves good job and you dont have noone because we (your friends) are all here for you never doubt it. we are here to see you through anything. anyways keep it up I loved the poem.
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    Re: Barely Living

    I only want to die
    Want this all to end
    very sad poem..Why this feeling flying in this poem *lone - sad - die...*
    BTW I love this poem ...Great JOb...^^

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    Re: Barely Living

    yeah.. @.@ full of negative energy there... good job... a wee bit darker...and there would be dark mist of black aura be coming out of it xD good job ^^

    *i hope my silly joke there made a bit of positive energy in ^^*

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    Re: Barely Living

    i'm okay guys don't worry. Negative one day. Happy as a clam the next. No worries, no worries!

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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